Saturday, March 23, 2013

3 + 33 WORDS__REMEMBER RAIN RELLION


I’ve just found another writing challenge called TRIFECTA [http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/] which offers different types of challenges. In this one you’re given three words and must enter 33 more to complete your response.  This week the three words are:  REMEMBER   RAIN   REBELLION.
This is my response:

Do you REMEMBER the day I led a REBELLION against our dictatorial boss; the RAIN never dampened our fortitude as we stood united without a whimper, and he lost his voice yelling at us we’re fired.
I'd love to hear what you think of it.

12 comments:

  1. Welcome to the challenge, Robin. I like the thoughts behind this . . . I see you are a retired civil servant - I work for a non-profit. Who has not had THIS boss? :)

    Concrit, if you don't mind - if you do, then toss this, it's okay. :)

    LEAD should be LED. And, there should be an "ed" behind dampen to make it past tense.

    Again - welcome and I love this more than you can know. (Barbara/PurpleMoose)

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    1. Hi Barbara,

      I'm glad you loved my first endeavor at right this stuff. I've just started to write Five Sentence Fiction from Lillie McFerrin [http://www.lilliemcferrin.com]

      And about the "concrit" ,,, I never look at honest criticism as criticism, I look at it as a form of guidance/support from one author/writer to another.

      Have a GREAT DAY !!!

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  2. I love how the boss lost his voice (: Justice served lol

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    1. How else could a union person have ended it. :-)

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  3. Good job capturing a bad situation.

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    1. THANKS for the feedback. I think I'm going like doing this as it will help me get my creative juices flowing in the wonderful little grey cells in my head so I can write some more for my second romance novel. This time it's going to be an adult Contemporary with a paranormal element running through the story line.

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  4. A boss like that should be fired.

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    1. Hi Sini

      THANKS for your feedback. He will be once his bosses find out what did to us which caused me to lead the rebellion. For that's for another 3+33 prompt. :-D :-D
      :-D

      Have a GREAT DAY !!!

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  5. A great first entry Robin,loved it:-)Welcome to Trifecta,looking forward to more from you in future

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    1. THANKS for the feedback. As I said in my response to Vanessa I think deals prompts will help me get the creative juices in my grey cells flowing, and could wake up the muses who visit as I sleep.

      Have a GREAT DAY !!!

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  6. Poetic justice if there ever was. Welcome!

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    1. Glad you liked my first endeavor with 3 + 33. As a longtime union person, that's what it was. Too bad things like this will never happen in the real world.
      And THANKS for the WELCOME.

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