This week Lillie McFerrin for her 5 Sentence Fiction
http://lilliemcferrin.com/ , gave us
the prompt word “PURPLE”, this is my endeavor for it:
THE ULTIMATE ACT OF VALOR
The color PURPLE covers the entire spectrum of life
itself, from the richest of people of royal blood who flaunt it in their
clothes they wear, to the lowly peasant who’s mourning the death of a loved
one.
But color PURPLE doesn’t make the person, the person
makes himself through their acts; a person of royal blood who thinks himself
better than those around him will not receive the respect of those below his
station, while a poor individual who regularly gives of himself, will be treated
with respect normally reserved for a king.
The lack of selfishness must be maintained at all
costs; and placed above everything else.
So when it comes to war, an extremely small
percentage will make the ultimate sacrifice and place their lives above
everyone else’s, an act of pure valor which can only be symbolized by a PURPLE heart.
Although small in size, a PURPLE heart is worth more
than a hundred times its weight in gold, mere because of what it represents.
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Totally agree with the statement you are making here. A very emotive piece on purple that makes you think of what is important and what people are sacrificing for us. xxx
ReplyDeleteTHANKS for your comment Lizzie,
DeleteThat's precisely the message I had in mind when I wrote it,
Purple is such a strong, powerful colour, just like your story. Really enjoyed reading.
ReplyDeleteTHANKS for your feedback Marie.
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