tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post8668823868572801120..comments2023-10-26T01:58:27.498-07:00Comments on MY WRITING JOURNEYS: FIVE SENTENCE FICTION - DELICATERobin Leigh Morganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-79666708786613507182013-02-06T07:38:54.871-08:002013-02-06T07:38:54.871-08:00THANKS Camilla.
I think I'm going to love doin...THANKS Camilla.<br />I think I'm going to love doing Lillie's "5 Sentence Fiction." I feel it will give me opportunities to venture out of the "comfort zone" of writing which I've done so far. My second novel is going to be a Contemporary Romance with a paranormal element running through must of the main storyline.<br />Glad you liked the spin I gave your endeavor, I simply wrote what I felt was being said/implied between your lines.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-86642517185839690432013-02-06T07:21:37.920-08:002013-02-06T07:21:37.920-08:00What a surprising story! I especially like the las...What a surprising story! I especially like the last sentence where his face changes as he realizes what she has done - very well written :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14261598391919619660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-76579799948658669312013-02-05T15:52:59.165-08:002013-02-05T15:52:59.165-08:00Kayla - THANKS for your feedback here.
I'm gl...Kayla - THANKS for your feedback here.<br /><br />I'm glad you loved my second endeavor at writing this stuff. Having to limit yourself to a mere 5 sentences is a real challenge to be able to communicate a complete story. I love it as it will help to get my creative juices flowing when I sit back down to finishing writing my second novel. Not rushing at the present time as I'm not selling my first endeavor the way I had hoped to.<br />Would love to hear what you thought about my comment for your endeavor for this same prompt.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-16280114871092502312013-02-05T15:11:14.469-08:002013-02-05T15:11:14.469-08:00Love this! Love the fact that people underestimate...Love this! Love the fact that people underestimate Mary based on her looks. Love the fact that she kept a knife in her boot! Great submission.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01652927023006006468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-50795750413786006412013-02-05T14:13:33.656-08:002013-02-05T14:13:33.656-08:00Sarah
THANKS for your feedback. This is one of the...Sarah<br />THANKS for your feedback. This is one of the messages I had tried to convey.<br /><br />Glad you agree with the comment I left on your blog.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-65405504229545594682013-02-05T13:59:52.282-08:002013-02-05T13:59:52.282-08:00you know what they say - never judge a book by its...you know what they say - never judge a book by its cover - he certainly didn't see that coming!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07953334708365738152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-54793640247883687222013-02-04T18:19:36.383-08:002013-02-04T18:19:36.383-08:00THANKS for your WONDERFUL feedback and I'm gla...THANKS for your WONDERFUL feedback and I'm glad you truly enjoyed reading it. I believe my journalistic background of writing close to 500 commentaries [ending more than 6 years ago] might have come into play as I wrote this 5 sentence endeavor. I knew I had to have a vivid dichotomy within the given limitation of sentences to have the greatest impact. :-) Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-83725924425709045732013-02-04T17:32:42.823-08:002013-02-04T17:32:42.823-08:00WOW! I really like what you've done with '...WOW! I really like what you've done with 'delicate' It's not at all what is expected, and the imagery in that first sentence sets the story up really well. Awesome job :)Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-4750313186233745652013-02-04T12:33:51.069-08:002013-02-04T12:33:51.069-08:00Timothy - THANKS for commenting on my endeavor.
Th...Timothy - THANKS for commenting on my endeavor.<br />This is what's GREAT about this exercise. While some might take a variety of romantic routes, others will take a humanistic route, and still others like yourself will turn to the beauty of nature when I write these five sentences.<br />I would now like to hear what you thought of what I had said on yours.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-79226225967053592322013-02-04T11:18:08.829-08:002013-02-04T11:18:08.829-08:00This is certainly a different route from where I w...This is certainly a different route from where I went, but well said. Expanded, this could be a stand alone short story, or lead into a much larger work. Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-11468804384713705232013-02-02T05:41:56.169-08:002013-02-02T05:41:56.169-08:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-38960641584541111192013-02-02T05:35:16.839-08:002013-02-02T05:35:16.839-08:00Hi Ann
THANKS for feedback. Glad you liked it. Wo...Hi Ann<br /><br />THANKS for feedback. Glad you liked it. Would love to see what you can do with this prompt... so join in.<br /><br />Going over to your site now.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-3572179965643164672013-02-02T05:24:10.449-08:002013-02-02T05:24:10.449-08:00This is a slice of life. Well done! I am following...This is a slice of life. Well done! I am following you, too, and hope you may join me as well.<br />McGuffy's Reader<br />http://www.mcguffysreadere.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-65349066795989637292013-02-02T03:16:53.177-08:002013-02-02T03:16:53.177-08:00This was my response to Lizzie there.
===========...This was my response to Lizzie there.<br /><br />==================================================<br /><br />Hi Lizzie<br /> It didn’t matter where you had left your comment. When I started, I had a website/blog on Webs.com and I quickly learned people had a preference as where will follow people; which is why I then added WordPress.com [here] and BlogSpot.com. I also have a 4th site on Tumblr.com [where I’m not post these threads at the present time. I merely write my entry on any of my sites and then copy/paste them onto the others.<br /> THANKS for your feedback here. Glad you liked what I did here. Like you said it is difficult to cover the story with all of its emotion in only five sentences; which is why I love this exercise, and why I duplicating it here.<br /> I don’t think the power of her would be rapist is missing, it’s there, albeit for only a brief moment. Remember he thought he was about to have his way with her until his fate made a 180-degree turn when she unexpectedly pulled out her knife. He thought he had someone who is helpless and delicate as he usually does.<br /> I’d love to hear your take on my first endeavor using the word “RINGING”<br /> <br />CHICKEN = ???<br />Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-19773598248760354042013-02-02T03:12:06.548-08:002013-02-02T03:12:06.548-08:00Lizzie, THANKS for deciding to follow me here. I&#...Lizzie, THANKS for deciding to follow me here. I'm going to take my liberty and repost/share the comment you left on my other<br /><br />==========================================================<br /><br />LIZZIE had left the following comment there:<br /><br />wasn’t sure where to leave my comment as you have 3 blog pages but seeing as everyone is here, that decided it for me.<br />I liked your take on the prompt very much!! . Never take someone on face value I think is a lesson learnt for both parties. I like the fact you have covered the cause, consequence and build up all in the 5 sentences. It is a tough subject and whilst the power of the rapist is missing, I feel this story is about her and how quickly your life can change when one decision is made to go out on a date which makes for an interesting viewpoint. Well done chicken. xx<br /><br />Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-14066197658770459772013-02-02T03:05:08.868-08:002013-02-02T03:05:08.868-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922541934744191820.post-56256016088496108192013-02-02T01:05:28.280-08:002013-02-02T01:05:28.280-08:00I left comment on one of your other pages but have...I left comment on one of your other pages but have joined your page here as a follower. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.com